Ever hear of a spell check or a proof read?
What really bugs me about movies on Newgrounds is that so many people just get to the end or close to the end of their flash movie and just say to themselves "okay! It's done! Quickly to upload it!"
A simple spell check or a proof read would alert you to several major errors.
In this movie, "there" was used where "their" should have been used. A simple grammatical error such as this goes to show the uncaring attitude the author portrays.
More effort and you could have some high scores, your art isn't half bad.